Oh Brother Prep work, Part 1: Building Character


Four cartoon drawings of a young boy (my brother) from four different angles. He has his fingers in his ears and is wearing a pink tee shirt and pink track pants.

I’m deep into penciling my book at the moment, working hard to hit my publisher deadlines, but I thought I’d share a look at the prep work I do for a story. This is stuff I do before I start working on the thumbnails (roughly drawn comic script) and often even before I start working on the written script.

The first thing I do is, unsurprisingly, draw the main characters. The reason for this, of course, is so I have a reference to what the characters look like, so when drawing them repeatedly over the 250+ pages of story I can keep them consistent and easily recognisable for readers. But I have to admit I used to hate doing turnarounds (drawing your character from multiple angles) and would usually only draw a character once in one very straight, boring pose. Back in 2016, when I first started working on Oh Brother, this was what my main characters looked like:

Black and white drawing of four people. Mum (short, curly hair, teeshirt and jeans) is covered in paint and holding a paintbrush. Dad (short spiky hair, jeans and woollen jumper) is holding a laptop and a hammer. Rob (short straight hair, rugby knit top, shorts and bare feet) is holding a can of coke and a picture book. Gina (bob-length hair, jeans and sleeveless top) is holding a sketchbook and a satchel bag.

As you can see, my style has changed and refined itself a bit since 2016, although the main elements of the characters are still there. My brother and I were also adults in this version of Oh Brother (which was told from my adult perspective looking back at my childhood). The biggest shock to me is that I hadn’t started drawing crosses in people’s ears yet (which is now my ear squiggle of choice).

As the years went by, and many versions, edits and rough penciled comics later, the way I drew my family had changed, including drawing everyone younger because the book was now told from my childhood perspective (hence why Dad has a moustache in the picture below - he shaved it off by the time I was an adult). By 2020, I was working with my agent, Annabel Barker, to pitch my book to publishers. Here is the family redraw for the pitch:

Four cartoon images of a young family standing on brown carpet. Mum (in purple colours) and Dad (in blue colours) stand behind Rob (in a pink jumpsuit, fingers in his ears and chew toy at his belt) and Gina (in red colours and with a pink birthmark on one leg).

After Oh Brother was picked up by a publisher, it quickly became clear that I needed to revisit my character reference sheets for this new version of the book. Not only because how I drew had changed so much since starting the book in 2016 but also because I had added a whole new main character for this version of the book: Callie, Gina’s best friend.

Four cartoon drawings of a young girl (Callie, best friend) from four different angles. She is standing straight and has long brown hair and is wearing a green tee, blue jean shorts, gold sleeper earrings and white sneakers.

Callie is an amalgam of a few of my real-life friends and their experiences with Rob, so I was able to create an entirely new character design for her (although it is loosely based on a few friends). As the newest character, she has changed the most as I’ve worked on the thumbnails and pencils, purely because I’ve drawn her a lot less than the other characters. (But, to be honest, my style is wobbly at the best of times anyway, so there is always some healthy shapeshifting in my characters.)

Four cartoon drawings of a woman (my mother) from four different angles. She is standing straight and is wearing a purple sleeveless top, blue jeans and purple sandals.

Speaking of shapeshifting, the character - or should I say element of a character - that I (still) find the hardest is my Mum’s hair. It doesn’t seem to matter how many times I draw it, its shape eludes me. This was also when I started confirming which colours I would associate with each character (again for ease of reading and knowing who is who).

Four cartoon drawings of a man (my father) from four different angles. He standing straight and is wearing a blue tee with a high collar, blue jeans and and dorky white sneakers.

The character I found easiest to draw was my Dad. We look pretty similar (facially) in real life so when cartooning Dad I basically draw myself with a moustache and spiky hair. When I’m not paying attention, I draw my freckles on Dad instead of his stubble (and vice versa!).

Four cartoon drawings of a young boy (my brother) from four different angles. He has his fingers in his ears and is wearing a pink tee shirt and pink track pants.

I find Rob a fun character to draw but also really tricky. The way he holds himself (in real life he is constantly moving) is something that can be really hard to capture in still cartoon images. But it’s a fun challenge to try to get across his actions in the comics. For the new turnaround, I had to find a way to clearly show that he had his fingers in his ears from the different angles (which was harder than I thought it would be).

Four cartoon drawings of a young girl (me) from four different angles. She is standing straight(ish) and is wearing a red tee, blue jean shorts and and red sneakers. She has a pink birthmark on one of her unshaven legs.

By the time I decided to redo my character design sheets for this version of the book, I had gotten over my dislike of turnarounds and embraced them as a good way to get to know these new versions of the characters. I wanted to be able to draw more interesting angles and scenes in my book (and not just talking heads - which is my natural instinct), so I needed to know what my characters looked like from multiple angles.

But I didn’t stop at just turnarounds! In my next blog I’ll get ‘emotional’ and start playing around with drawing a full range of facial expressions for all of my characters.

Into the Comics Mines


An illustration of Gina holding an iPad, paper, pack of pretzels and a cup of tea and wearing a sash of pencils and a cap with a candle melted to the brim. Gina is looking unenthusiastically at a cave made from comics pages. The cave has signs stuck to it that read “Welcome to the comics mines”, “Danger RSI Ahead”, “Turn back and back up your harddrive” and “Beware of papercuts.”

Hello dear friends! This is it. I’m about to go into the comics mines for the next 6 months (approximately). What does this mean? It means that I will be working 5 days a week on the book with 1 day a week aside for admin & running workshops. Because of this fairly inflexible and tight work schedule, until the book is in the hot little hands of the publisher (approximately August) I will be taking a step back from posting online. This is to help me focus on getting pages done, as my brain starts fritzing out if I have too many projects to juggle, and social media posting in particular takes a lot of my brain energy powers.

📰BUT I will still be sending out my monthly e-newsletter to keep you updated on the book and share sneak peeks at anything else I can manage to squeeze into my spare time (I predict these things to be mostly sleeping, many cups of tea and watering the garden). I love sending out my newsletter and it makes me real happy when folks sign up - it’s the best way to let you know what I’ve been up to.

Oh Brother thumbnails finished!


SO

I realised that I never posted about finishing the Oh Brother thumbnails, and it was such a big step towards getting the book done that I wanted to share how I got there. Last year I spent most of my studio time working on re-drawing my Oh Brother thumbnails for my publisher. When my book got picked up by the publisher, I had written the whole book in script form (although the last 100 pages were a hot mess), drawn the first 250 pages in rough pencils, and inked and coloured the first 40 pages or so. Originally the book was written from the point of view of me as a 25-year-old (which was how old I was when I started writing the book) with non-chronological flashbacks to my childhood growing up with my brother. But just from talking to various publishers who were interested – this is before I signed my contract with Penguin Random House – it became very clear that whichever publisher I worked with would need me to re-write the book to be from my point of view as a kid.

CHANGES

Because of my drawing style (which is such a big part of how comics stories are read), the book was going to be sold as a middle grade (aimed at approx. 8-12 year olds) graphic novel and because the book was bought by four territories (Australia, UK, Canada and the US) it also needed to fit into certain publishing parameters. For example, the main character needed to be 12 or under so the book would be put into the middle grade section (and not the YA section) in bookstores in America. I was asked to change certain words and phrases (e.g. op shop to thrift store) and change iced coffee to a non-caffeinated drink (soda was suggested but I landed on milkshakes), things like why I was starting high school in year 8 needed to be explained, I couldn’t mention sanitary pads without explaining periods and I was asked about changing Vegemite (one of my brother’s absolute favourite foods/hyper-fixations) to peanut butter. I pushed back on the Vegemite change (and some of the other Australian wording changes); instead I leant into using asterisks* to explain things that might be confusing for international readers (anyone outside Australia). I really wanted the book to feel like my childhood growing up in a beachside South Australian suburb.

*My inner Terry Pratchett fan wasn’t mad about this.

A collection of some of the Oh Brother scripts and thumbnails from over the 7 years working on the book.

The biggest change that I had to do was making the story chronological and giving my character a narrative arc. Initially I didn’t really want to do this, partially because I think 8-12 year olds can read non-chronological vignette-y type stories but probably also because I was afraid I couldn’t write a chronological narrative. I’ve never felt confident in my ability to write narrative, I’ve always considered myself a character-focused writer and plot just sort of happens as a side effect (this is why I love autobiography - story/narrative is generally already in-built). My solution to this narrative problem was to create a friend character (called Callie), who is based on a combination of a few of my close friends (and their experiences meeting and interacting with my brother). The personality of and interactions I have with Callie in the book are based predominantly on one of my very best friends from high school (they know who they are). And one of the things I actually enjoyed about having to re-write the book was to get to include their beautiful energy and show my love for our friendship in my story.

 

First sketch of Gina and Callie together.

 

FEELINGS

With all these changes needing to be made, I had to go back to the start and outline, script, thumbnail and draw the whole book again. Obviously I had the original book I’d already made to use for reference but it really felt like I was starting from the beginning. I’m not going to lie, it was pretty hard to sit down and re-write the book. On top of having to revisit some tough memories, I also had to weave in a whole new narrative about myself & my amalgamated friend. I felt weird (and still do a little) for creating this fictional narrative, even though it is based solidly on experiences, interactions with friends and feelings I’ve had. It definitely felt like I was lying to the reader. But now that I’ve finished writing this version of the book, I think that it is a much better book for the changes and I hope that people will see the emotional truths in the narrative sections that aren’t 100% accurate (not that any memory can be 100% accurate ‘cos our brains re-write over memories all the time!)

Current scanned and printed thumbnails on top of their original drawings.

STEPS

Here are the steps that I have gone through to complete this new version of the thumbnails:

(1) Outline
I had never written an outline before, so I wasn’t really sure exactly what needed to be included (and I’m still not sure). I ended up with a 3 page text document that explained who the characters are, highlighted some of the major story beats, and outlined the narrative journey and ending for the characters. I received a 3 page document from my editors with suggestions and things to think about when I moved onto the . . .

(2) Written Script
This was initially quite hard for me, as I haven’t written many scripts for other people to read. For my mini comics I usually settle with a dot point list of story beats or just go straight to thumbnailing out the story, as I’m more of a visual thinker/writer. I gave myself the goal of writing 5 pages a day (3-4 days a week, basically whenever I could get studio time outside of other work). This helped me to break down the daunting task of re-writing the script into manageable chunks (it was still pretty hard though). What I did enjoy about the script stage was the puzzle solving of taking the stories I already had from the previous version and working out how to fit them in the new version of the story.

I wrote the script in Pages (Apple’s word doc program) because it’s free and I already had it. I set up the pages so each page of the word doc related to a drawn page of the comic and formatted it so I would view two pages at a time, so I’d get an idea of where the page turns would be, which are super important for a comics story flow.

The text itself was written kinda like a film script with each panel numbered and followed by the dialogue or brief description of what is in the panel. Like this:

Example of a page of my script.

Once the script was done, I sent it off to the the editors for feedback. I mostly have contact with my Australian editors (who take all the feedback from the UK, Canadian and US editors and collate it for me to read). It’s such a great opportunity to have so many eyes on my work but, heck, it’s suuuuuper daunting too. I found feedback on the script initially overwhelming and needed a little break before I took it on board and starting applying it to the . . .

(3) Thumbnails
After I gave myself a brain break from the script feedback and reminded myself not to take it personally and that my editors don’t think that I’m a terrible writer (which is what my jerk-of-a-brain naturally jumps to thinking), I was able to see how useful a lot of the editors’ feedback was for my book and start to put even more of those story puzzles together (I can’t emphasise enough how good it feels in my brain when I make good story connections that I didn’t see before!).

 

Some original pages of thumbnails. Ink drawings with limited texta colour and some whiteout.

 

One of the main pieces of feedback I received on the script was that I needed to cut out about 30 pages of story (minimum) to hit the maximum number of pages the publisher could print. The printer that my publisher uses prints pages in groups of 16 - so that means the page count has to be a multiple of 16 within a specific range of page count options that are average for the type of book being published. It was the hardest thing having to cut out scenes that I’d had in the book from the beginning but didn’t really fit in this new version of the book. The one I’m still the most sad about is the Vegemite Parrot story.

My amazing partner Owen formatted a thumbnail template with guidelines so I could more easily draw up panels (which is my least favourite thing to do, my panels are often wobbly at best). There were four comics pages to each sheet of thumbnails. I drew the thumbs about a third the size of the final printed page with a uni-ball ‘eye’ fine pen (and colour-coded some of the characters so it was easier to tell who was talking). Then I’d scan the pages in, cut them into individual pages and hand them back to Owen (with a plain text doc of the script) and he lettered the thumbs digitally so that they were readable.

Some original pages of thumbnails. Ink drawings with limited texta colour and some whiteout.

In the future (whether I’m working on personal projects or with a publisher) I think I will merge the script & thumbs stages, as I found that I edited script pages a lot as I adapted them into comics (when I realised that a certain angle might not work as well or I needed more space or panels [or less!] for a particular scene). I think going straight to thumbnails would reduce the amount or at least some of the type of feedback I'd get from just a script version.

 

Some original pages of thumbnails. Ink drawings with limited texta colour and some whiteout.

 

When I finally finished the thumbs, I uploaded them to Dropbox and emailed through the link to the editors, which was super underwhelming. I really thought it would feel good to finish everything but just sending off the link really didn’t do much for me. What did get me excited about finishing the thumbs was when I printed out a physical copy of them for the Comic Art Workshop (which I attended in November 2022). Holding the 270 pages of comics in my hand made a HUGE difference in how I felt about finishing the thumbnails. It felt like I’d actually made a book (obviously there is a lot more to do still, but holding the printed copy made me feel better about all the hours I’d spent working on it over the past year).

 

Gina is smiling, wearing a pink t-shirt and round silver glasses and holding the printed copy of the Oh Brother thumbs next to her face.

 

After completing the thumbnails, my next step was to get the book ready for . . .

(4) Sensitivity Readers
The final step for the thumbnails was getting them ready for sensitivity readers (a sensitivity reader's job is to read a manuscript and make sure that the story is sensitive to marginalised groups - for me, specifically the autism community). To get the book ready, I needed to go through my editors' feedback on the thumbs (which was minimal as most of the major story feedback was at script stage) as well as re-read the book (again) to try to cut down even more text on certain text-heavy pages. My editors will also do copy edits (probably more than one) on the book, making sure all the text meets the publishing house’s style guides.

As someone who hates re-reading their work and is not a succinct storyteller (I always want to over-explain everything, like right now!), this is a particularly hard but essential part of the writing process for me. As well as making these edits, I also created a 3 page comic introduction (page 1 pictured below) to the story and a little afterword (which explains more of what happened after the story in the book finished).

 

A page of pen sketch drawings that introduces Gina and things that she likes to do.

 

The editors gave me some really good feedback for tightening up or clarifying some of the plot and I think I managed to catch a few things that I would've kicked myself for later, if I'd missed them. So even though re-reading my own work pains me, I know it's the right thing to do.

What’s next

While I wait for the sensitivity readers’ feedback and initial copy edits, I’m going to get stuck into my pencils. The amazing Owen has done it again and has helped me set up templates for my pencils (which I’m going to try to do in Procreate for ease of editing and convenience of being able to take with me wherever I want) and a page count tracking spreadsheet (to help keep me on task). I’ve got to pencil the whole book by the end of April, so I’ll be heading into the comics mines and probably not posting (or generally leaving the house) much. Wish me luck!

An illustration of Gina holding an iPad, paper, pack of pretzels and a cup of tea and wearing a sash of pencils and a cap with a candle melted to the brim. Gina is looking unenthusiastically at a cave made from comics pages. The cave has signs stuck to it that read “Welcome to the comics mines”, “Danger RSI Ahead”, “Turn back and back up your harddrive” and “Beware of papercuts.”

Bonus

If you want to read about how I went about thumbnailing Oh Brother the first time (it’s a quite different!), you can read my I’m All Thumbs post from 2017.

Drawing Buddies - January Challenge


Above: Roof Rat by George Rex based on Jake Holmes’s Roof Rat.

Above left: Roof Rat by Jake Holmes. Based on the Highway Rat by Julia Donaldson, illustrated by Axel Scheffler.

Above right: The Highway Rat by Axel Scheffler.

This year my screenprinter & illustrator pal Jake Holmes (jaketoothandnail on instagram) and I have decided to be drawing buddies. Each month we will take turns to decide on a drawing challenge that we will both undertake over the course of the month. Jake already has his own goal of drawing for at least 30 minutes every day, which he’s been doing for the past couple of years, and I’m trying to do that too this year (that’s 30 minutes of ‘free’ drawing, on top of my Oh Brother work!). The monthly drawing challenges we come up with are more to help us have a guideline of something to draw, if we’re ever stuck for ideas. I’m hoping to use these drawing prompts to challenge my skills, particularly in areas that I’m weakest (perspective, adding backgrounds, light and shadow, pushing poses to be even more animated).

Above left: Jaunty Space Man by George Rex based on Jake Holmes’s illustration “Homecoming”.

Above right: Jake Holmes’s original illustration “Homecoming”.

The January challenge was set by Jake. It was simple: we scroll through each other’s instagram account, pick some characters that the other had already drawn & posted, and then redraw the characters in our own style. My aim was to do one a week throughout January. I tried to pick a range of different characters and then push their poses and add backgrounds (if they didn’t have them already).

Above left: Tina Papanikolas by George Rex, watercolour illustration.

Above right: Tina Papanikolas by Jake Holmes, based on watercolour illustration by George Rex.

Jake ended up drawing a version of one my favourite characters I’ve created in the past few years, Tina Papanikolas, who (along with her new best friend Tori) solves mysteries and crimes happening in their neighbourhood. I love Jake’s version of Tina, particularly how he captures her cool mesh skirt (I get to live out all my fashion dreams through Tina). My version of Tina that Jake based his off is one of the few watercolour illustrations I did last year, when I was trying to get a handle on different mediums.

I really like how Jake uses light and shade to bring his characters to life, and redrawing his characters this month has really pushed me to think about how I use light (or don’t) in my illustration and comics.

Above left: The Gang by George Rex based on Jake Holmes’s cool teens illustration.

Above right: Jake Holmes’s original illustration of three cool teens.

These Jake characters were the most like ones I would normally draw and I had a lot of fun trying to show their personalities through their poses. When I showed Jake my version, he said that he’d been inspired by how I draw characters when creating the original drawings. I thought that was pretty neat.

I had a ton of fun redrawing Jake’s characters and it was a great way to get into the habit of drawing every day, because I knew when I sat down to draw that I didn’t have to think about what to draw, I just had to have a quick scroll through Jake’s instagram and get inspired. So far this year I’ve managed to draw every day for at least half an hour and it feels really good!

Above left: Cheese Wizard by George Rex based on Jake Holmes’s Cheese Wizard illustration.

Above right: Cheese Wizard by Jake Holmes. Jake originally drew this character based on a prompt by me!

It’s been really interesting drawing so much that I notice little habits of mine, like how I generally love my pencil sketch but then hate the inked version (and the flat colours even more). But when I start adding in shading (and highlights) or textures, it all starts coming together. When it’s just inks and flats, it looks okay but it’s kinda like looking at a haircut halfway through, it’s almost there but it hasn’t got that pizzazz of a final drawing.

It’s my choice for our February drawing challenge but I haven’t decided what it will be yet. But I’m looking forward to it and seeing what we both come up with (it’s always more fun to do a drawing challenge with a buddy, it definitely helps to keep me more motivated).

My Top Reads of 2022


According to my book tracker app, I read 128 books last year. There were lots of really interesting reads and comics that got me excited about the medium. But here is a list of my absolute top reads for 2022 (and the reasons why I liked them). I’ve posted them in alphabetical order for lack of something more original.

  1. Apple Crush

    by Lucy Knisley

I like this book because: It really captured some of the feelings I had growing up when some of my friends and schoolmates started crushing on each other (and I just didn’t get it). Plus I’m always here for Lucy Knisley’s art.

Read if you like: Slice-of-life stories about being an awkward pre-teen who likes drawing. Also halloween!

2. Button Pusher

by Tyler Page

I like this book because: This memoir about Page’s experiences growing up, getting diagnosed with ADHD & starting medication trials was sensitively told. I particularly enjoyed the information sections of the book (coloured only in shades of blues to distinguish them from the main full coloured story). They were clear and very interesting.

Read if you like: Finding out about people’s personal experiences around ADHD.

3. Cat’s Cradle: The Golden Twine

by Jo Rioux

I like this book because: Of the very beautiful art and exciting fantasy world building. Just a fun, well-told fantasy comic with lots of fun lore to get stuck into. I definitely wanted more at the end of the book though (this book is labelled book 1, so here’s hoping that number 2 comes out soon).

Read if you like: Cheeky and confident street urchin characters with great storytelling skills.

4. Freestyle

by Gale Galligan

I like this book because: It was just a heck of a lot of fun! Galligan is a master of drawing over-dramatic emotions and showing complex interpersonal relationships between friends and families! Freestyle made me laugh a lot reading it and made me want to take up yo-yo-ing!

Read if you like: Yo-yos and fun stories about misunderstandings and friends.

5. the greatest thing

by Sarah Winifred Searle

I like this book because: It’s the book I wish I’d read as teen. This fictional story is based on Searle’s experiences navigating high school, eating disorders, budding friendships and zine publishing. I particularly loved the weaving of the character’s zines throughout the story and I think it was my favourite book I read in 2022.

Read if you like: Books that don’t shy away from the hard subjects but handle them with care. Zines and zine creators.

6. Just Roll with It

by Veronica Agarwal & Lee Durfey-Lavoie

I like this book because: The interpersonal communications in this book, dialogue and depictions of anxiety and OCD were really well written. I found the character of Maggie incredibly relateable and her journey throughout the book heartening. I couldn’t put it down!

Read if you like: Stories about anxiety, OCD and Dungeons & Dragons!

7. Lightfall book 2: Shadow of the Bird

by Tim Probert

I like this book because: Its beautiful art and succinct storytelling easily sucked me into this fantasy world. I particularly enjoyed how easy the action is to follow and how anxiety is visualised.

Read if you like: Main characters with anxiety overcoming their worries and going on fantastical adventures.

8. Ride ON

by Faith Erin Hicks

I like this book because: Hicks really knows how to capture people’s personalities and emotions. Reading her comics I feel like I’m just slipping in alongside her characters and I’m part of the gang. And boy, can she draw horses!

Read if you like: Awkwardly making friends, bonding over your favourite sci-fi show and horses. There are a lot of horses.

9. The Tryout

by Christina Soontornvat & Joanna Cacao

I like this book because: It surprised me. I thought I would enjoy the story but didn’t expect to really love it! Having never really felt like I fitted into (or even wanted to fit into) the “popular girl/cheerleader” image, I was surprised when I was drawn into these stories of growing up, wanting to fit in but also wanting to be yourself, which were brilliantly handled by Soontornvat & Cacao.

Read if you like: Feel-good and relatable personal stories, memoirs about growing up as a person of colour in a predominantly white city, and delightful art.

10. Twin Cities

by Jose Pimienta

I like this book because: It deals with the complex relationships between siblings who are growing apart and school friends that you’re not sure should be your friend and what comes from living on the border of two countries. I enjoyed learning more about what life living on the US/Mexico border is like.

Read if you like: Stories about siblings and growing up.

11. Welcome to St. Hell: My Trans Teen Misadventure

by Lewis Hancox

I like this book because: Of how unapologetically British the language was (I love comics that use region-specific dialogue - if I’m not sure about something I get to look it up and learn something new!). Also how this memoir tackled changes of views over time (particularly with parents).

Read if you like: Personal memoirs with trans stories.

Looking for great comics to read? Check out my Recommended Reading List. It’s a list of some of my favourite comics, organised loosely into reading ages and fiction & non-fiction.

What have been some of your favourite comics, books or zines to read this year? I’m always looking for reading suggestions - comment below if there is a cool comic you recommend!

Map-Making


A illustrated map of Swamp-Ridge-on-Sea. A fictional island where supernatural creatures live.

One of my very first loves was map-making: as a kid, maps were one of my favourite things to draw. I would make maps of treasure islands, maps of our neighbourhood and maps of my bedroom (usually during my annual rearranging-fest when I was trying to figure out where I wanted my stuff to be for MAXIMUM BEDROOM PERFECTION. As an adult I still do this but for my studio. The never-ending goal of finding just the right place for everything is a curse I am willing to bear.

Illustrated diagram of the same bedroom with 3 room variations, titled “Various permutations of my room”.

Recently I’ve been getting into the animated series Craig of the Creek (which is absolutely delightful and fast becoming a firm favourite with me - thanks Mitch for the recommendation!). The titular character, Craig, is a self-proclaimed map-boy whose goal (while adventuring with pals) is to map the Creek where all their adventures happen. Watching it has reminded me of my absolute love of maps and prompted me to share some of the maps I’ve made, including this Story Maze Map.

Forest Story Maze Map. The map is of a forest with a yellow sandy path. The words START HERE and a bonfire are in the middle of the forest. Throughout the forest are scattered different monsters.

This one was originally designed for an issue of Pigeon Post (a quarterly publication by 100 Story Building, a centre for young writers). You start in the middle of the forest and choose a path to follow. Throughout the forest are scattered different monsters, events or items and when you come across one of these you need to incorporate them into the story you’re telling.

E.g. It was a bright sunny day and we were in the middle of a lush green forest. The trees were so tall and the canopy was so thick that you could barely see the sky. We couldn’t at all remember how we got here.
“We have to get home!” Sophie said. “It’s almost tea-time! I can’t miss dessert. Not again.”
We all agreed: missing dessert was not acceptable.
“I have a good feeling about the path to the left,” I said.
“I think right is the right way,” said Tom.
“Split the difference?” asked Carsen.
It was settled; we would go down the middle path. A short way into our journey there was a sharp turn which opened into a small clearing where we saw a large black cauldron bubbling over with something sticky, pink and incredibly smelly.

I’d love to do more of these Story Maze Maps. Or just more maps in general. Is it really a story if it doesn’t have a map?

A small section of my collection of maze & map making books.

I’ve shared my love of map-making with a variety of my students over the years. Recently I ran my map-making workshop with my Inky Fingers kids and they took to the challenge of making maps like a duck takes to eating popcorn. Here are some of the maps they created. They had to include:

  • A compass

  • A key (with 3 different items, e.g road, forest, lake)

  • A cartouche (a fancy illustrated title for the map, so people know what it is a map of and who drew it)

  • At least 3 special landmarks (e.g. home, a mysterious mountain, the best fish & chip shop).

I’ve been wanting to put together a short map-drawing activity book for a while (maybe once the final art is all done for Oh Brother and I have a bit more free time). But I have created a little guided resource for the workshops I currently run and I’ve just popped a free downloadable PDF version up on my online store. So if you’re looking for a fun summer holiday activity, head here to download it for free.

Two black and white worksheets on a green checked cutting board with two rulers and a lead pencil.

I love poring over maps of all types, they help me make sense of a world and give me a feeling of comfort and order. But also there is so much storytelling you can do with maps! If you have a go at making your own map, I’d love to see what you come up with.

A short comic where a friendly postal bat give a map to two lost witches.

Death


Here, for your reading enjoyment, is one of my early “published” works (from when I was 7). This was created for a school assignment. The idea was that we had to create a character using the ever-popular (at least while I was in primary school) computer art program called Kidpix (I really loved that program). I created a character called “Death” (I think my folks had just started reading Terry Pratchett books to me). This masterpiece includes some of my finest illustrative work (poo brown clouds with a variety of emotions) and features Kyra, who is still my friend to this day .

I’m impressed that I already had a grasp of what is “cool” (see: the sun wearing sunglasses).

Noodling around with ink wash


A while back I rediscovered a heap of ink wash pens I’d made back when I thought I would really get into using brushes and ink. I’d decided to start off with brush pens instead of jumping straight into using regular brushes (which seemed tricky and impossible, and still does a bit!). I took three refillable reservoir watercolour brush pens and filled each of them with varying ratios of ink. One pen was mostly water with just a bit of ink, another pen was 50/50 water/ink and the final pen was all ink.

Three brush pens with refillable reservoirs. Each pen has slightly darker ink than the one before.

I tried them out for a bit but at the time I don’t think I really liked the messy line I was making (after exclusively using fineliners my entire illustrative life) and couldn’t push through the uncomfortable perfectionist talk my brain was giving me, so I gave up on that inky brush dream. Recently, however, having used a bit more watercolour, I was curious about trying these out again, but treating them more like shading tools (and keeping those strong fineliner lines I feel confident with. Baby steps!). I mostly used the first two brush pens (the one that is mostly water and the 50/50 one). But I wanted to make sure that the scene I was drawing felt like it should be in B&W, so of course I landed with a fairy private detective in a film noir-style setting. Here are the steps I took to create this piece:

Step 1: Sketch it out

Using whatever scrap paper I had lying around, I sketched out the design loosely. As I wanted to practice my perspective (my nemesis) as well as using only shades of grey instead of colour, I had to draw this scene a few times to get it as close as I could to what I wanted. I was struggling to decide if I wanted it to be in isometric perspective or a more real perspective. I feel like I kinda landed somewhere in between.

Step 1: A rough pen sketch of a pixie sitting in a private detective’s office. The detective is a fairy.

Step 2: Pencil and Ink

Now that I’d come up with a game plan, I popped over to our light table and, on a fresh piece of paper, pencilled out the scene again (using the sketch underneath for a guide). I then turned off the light table and inked the pencilled drawing. You can see where I’ve (not particularly successfully) tried to start marking in where I think the light might fall.

Step 2: A tight drawing of the pixie and the detective fairy. You can see some lead pencil marks under the clean simple inked line work.

Step 3: Final Inks and Ink Wash

I wasn’t super happy with how I inked the scene the first time, so I actually inked it again on a fresh piece of paper (getting out the light table again and using the pencil/inked drawing for the guide this time). If you look closely at Step 2 and 3 you can spot the minor differences in the line work (and some things that are missing!).

Once inked (with a fineliner), I erased the pencils and added in the shading with the ink wash brushes. As someone who generally just block colours everything, it was an interesting experience figuring out what to colour in and what to leave as a highlight.

Step 3: The same scene of the pixie and detective fairy but now it also has ink wash added to give depth, shading and indicate where the light source is coming from.

Although the line work is still a bit wonky, the perspective isn’t perfect and the lighting is…fine, I’m pretty happy with how this turned out in the end. I particularly loved the texture in the picture that came from using paper with more of a rough tooth (I usually use the smoothest of paper as I hate the feeling of my fineliners on a rough paper).

Anyway, that’s it! I really enjoyed working in greyscale and it really highlighted to me how little I know about shading and light. Lots to practice! I would love to do more ink wash and refine those skills for sure. Maybe I should make a whole comic about this fairy detective (or at least paint some keys scenes from a possible story a fairy detective might go through)?

Oh Brother Update 2022


Back in 2016, I started work on a project I thought would take me a year (hah!). This project was to be my first graphic novel: a memoir about growing up with my brother (who is autistic and has an intellectual disability). My goal was to create a book for 12-year-old me, a book that reflected my experiences and feelings and would’ve (hopefully) helped me feel less alone in those feelings and experiences.

From a technical comics-making point of view, I thought it would be pretty straightforward. I’d made lot of mini-comics by that point (but nothing longer than about 40 pages) and I’d made lots of autobio comics before, even some about growing up with my brother. I already had in my mind a lot of the experiences I wanted to share, as a lot of them I already openly talked about with my parents and friends (they had become family fables such as the “Vegemite Parrot story” or the “Pad-peeing incident”. And I’m a pretty quick drawer, so I thought once I got the story down, the rest would be a breeze!

Spoiler alert: It was not a breeze.

I found that not only was there a steep learning curve in making a 300 page graphic novel vs a 30 page mini-comic (let alone watching my drawing style evolve and refine over that first year of working on the book), but there was also a steep emotional learning curve. Working on these stories meant that I relived a lot of my childhood experiences, and some, particularly stories about times when my brother would attack me, were a lot harder to relive than I expected.

Where I’m at right now

After years of working on the book in my spare time, or when I got the support of a residency or fellowship or grant for a more concentrated period of work, I was lucky enough to be approached by my now agent, Annabel Barker. With Annabel’s help (and that of another agent, Dan Lazar), I was able to talk to several publishers that were interested in working with me on the book. And in early 2021, Penguin Random House (PRH) picked up the book in a deal that means it will now be published (ETA 2024) in four territories (Australia, Canada, UK and US).

Although it is super exciting to be working with such a well-known publisher, it’s also been quite nerve-wracking to think that this book that I originally assumed I would be self-publishing is now to be published by one of the major book publishers in the world.

There have been a lot of changes that I’ve had to make while working with PRH (more on that in a future blog post). Last year (2021) and this year (2022) I have been working with my four editors (one in each territory) to re-write the script and thumbnails (the rough comic drawings). It’s definitely been a challenge re-writing something that is so personal to me (and so complex). I would be lying if I said I’ve enjoyed having to make big-ish cuts to a project that has lived with me for multiple years. But saying that, although the book is quite different now, I think I’m starting to feel proud of the type of book it has become.

So far this project has taken: 6 years, 1 scholarship, 1 fellowship, 1 grant, 2 mentors, 2 residencies, 3 peer feedback sessions, 37 blacking pearl pencils, 2 agents, 3 publisher rejections, 3 publisher bids, 1 publisher, 4 editors, 4 territories, 3 versions, 24 therapy sessions, 1 brother, 2 parents, 1 million cups of tea and 1 ongoing case of imposter syndrome.

I’ll be doing more posts soon about the re-writing process and how my art has evolved. But if you’re keen to read more about my early process with the book, check out the Oh Brother tag in my Blog Posts Archive. There are quite a few posts there (although these are from 5 or 6 years ago and I haven’t recently re-read them, so I’m not sure how similarly I feel now — I’m not ready to re-read them yet).

Also, for those who are curious about all the steps I’ve taken with Oh Brother over the years, here’s a timeline:

Timeline of making Oh Brother GN

2015

  • The idea for the GN starts forming

  • Created short comic stories about Rob and me that were published in Voiceworks and the comic anthology Australia

  • Took part in Comic Art Workshop residency on Maria Island (but workshopping a different memoir comic)

2016

  • Put aside other memoir comic to focus on Oh Brother

  • Received the Colin Thiele Scholarship for Creative Writing through Carclew

  • Worked with Mandy Ord & Pat Grant as mentors

  • Kept a weekly blog about the process of working on the book

  • Finished pencil draft of part 1 (approx. 100 pages)

  • Created a comic about growing up with Rob that was published on The Nib

  • Printed an Oh Brother mini-comic sampler

2017

  • Received the Ian Wilson Memorial Fellowship from the May Gibbs Children’s Literature Trust

  • Finished pencil draft of part 2 (approx. 150 pages)

  • Quit my day job at the ABC

  • Took part in Comic Art Workshop residency on Jogjakarta (received feedback on the pencil drafts of two-thirds of the book & the script of the final third)

2018

  • Dead year. Kept trying to tackle editing the final section of the script but struggled to get anywhere

  • Cried a lot

  • Did some other things. Probably

  • Spent 6 weeks in Melbourne working with 100 Story Building

  • Spent 9 weeks travelling overseas

2019

  • Started therapy for the first time, turns out most people don’t cry all the time

  • Co-organised the first Papercuts Comic Festival

  • Took part in Comic Art Workshop residency on Dangar Island

2020

  • Contacted by Annabel Barker (literary agent) through website

  • Signed on with Annabel & developed a pitch for publishers

  • Annabel brought in Dan Lazar (New York agent) to help with the American side of things

  • Sent out book pitch to publishers and waited to hear back

  • Had phone conversations with various interested editors from different publishers in US and Australia

  • Received Independent Artists and Groups grant from Arts SA

2021

  • Three publishers put in offers for the book

  • Accepted PRH offer!

  • PRH took forever to send through a contract (four territories even within the same publisher don’t often talk to each other)

  • Started work on re-writing the book, creating a new story outline (making the story more narrative) and taking away the adult perspective of the story

  • Received PRH feedback on the outline, which was as long as the outline itself :/

  • Wrote a new script

  • Co-organised the second Papercuts Comics Festival (and was totally burnt out)

2022

  • Received script feedback from PRH in January (four months after submitting script)

  • Feedback was extensive, with the major notes being that the page count needed to be reduced (and some elements needed to be adjusted for the American audience)

  • Started tackling thumbnails

  • Had to renegotiate the thumbnail deadline several times because taking on the feedback turned out to be harder than expected

  • Completed the thumbnails!

  • Will take part in Comic Art Workshop residency at Yarrangobilly Caves

  • Received Professional Development grant from Arts SA to attend Comic Art Workshop

  • Currently awaiting feedback from editors about thumbnails

Experimenting with Watercolour


New BFFs Tina and Tori sit in their pyjamas, eating lollipops and reading comics on Tina’s bedroom floor.

I know that my last post was all about how I’ve been slowly moving towards working entirely digitally (which is really useful when working with clients and editors and I’m having to make lots of tweaks and changes on a project), but I think working so much on my iPad for work-based illustration and comics has pushed me into wanting to try out different mediums when making fun illustrations for myself. In particular, I’ve really been keen to get into watercolour.

Tina is wearing her favourite clothes that make her happy, showing off her multicoloured scarf and green tile skirt.

I’ve tried delving into watercolour a few times: I’ve tried plein air painting, I’ve asked friends for tips, I’ve watched YouTube videos. I aways thought that if I just found the “right” set of watercolours that it would all make sense and I’d be able to paint the images like I could see them in my head. But what has really stopped me in my tracks every time I’ve tried my hand at watercolours is the fact that I’m just not that good at using them straight away (not that there is any reason why I should be naturally adept at watercolours). So I kinda give up before I give myself a chance to really learn how to handle them.

My watercolour tribute to Mr Tod (the kind-of-a-jerk fox gentleman character from Beatrix Potter’s book).

With some (possibly unfounded) optimism that this time would be different, for my birthday this year I treated myself to the Kuretake Gansai Tambi watercolour set. I’d seen a few mates use them online and they looked quite different to other watercolours I’d tried before. And they are pretty lovely to use, almost more like a gouache so the colours are more opaque (less see-through) than other watercolours. As I’m so used to working in smooth flat digital colour, I find that that the washy-ness of watercolours makes my attempts look not like my own art. (Although I love this look in other people’s work, I’ve found I don’t love it for my work.) However, when I started playing around with the Gansai Tambi’s more opaque pigments, I found them really pleasing to use and like I had more sense of how to handle them. Plus, the colours are delightful and warm my soul.

Kuretake Gansai Tambi 48 colour watercolour set (includes a really great pink and lilac as well as boss metallic colours).

Although I’m enjoying watercolours a lot more this time, it does feel like I'm back to basics and having to learn how to make art yet again. But I’m really excited about learning new art skills and how to control and use watercolours so they can help me create more interesting works. This time that I’ve delved into watercolours, it feels like a puzzle to solve instead of me just failing at something I “should” be good at. My brain feel like it clicks into gear and wants to make the images in my head appear on the page in front me.

A fancy-looking anthropomorphic dog with a moustache wearing a red dressing gown stands in front of an old and full bookcase. They are holding a bone in one hand and an old-fashioned smoking pipe in the other.

After chatting to another friend, they mentioned I should try using coloured pencil on top of the watercolour for more detailed things, which I loved when I tried it out with this fancy dog in a smoking jacket picture (see above). I haven’t really tried all the possibilities with pencils & watercolour yet but I’m keen to see where that could go too. Sensory-wise, it feels really nice to draw with pencil over the watercolours.

Scully, junior “repawtor” for the The Fire Hydrant, sits, bored, at their desk waiting for an exciting story to break.

I love the flexibility of working digitally but nothing draws me into a work more than if it’s traditionally watercoloured or coloured by pencil (particularly if you can see the mistakes or wobbles the artist has made). There is something about the hand-made nature of it and the textures of the paint on paper that speaks to my soul. Maybe one day I’ll be able to make a watercolored picture book. I do not think that I will ever watercolour a whole comic though. That way madness lies.